There are likely several flaws in there…
Anyway, don’t forget that there are also 5% 1,3-butylene glycol in said formulation. Which brings me to the first flaw: no control without it but only your 3 preservatives/boosters. Though it is possible that there wouldn’t be much of a difference or that 2-3 times higher amounts of diols are needed if 1,3-butylene glycol isn’t used. Likely depends on the formulation (water activity!).
Try it out.
Hexanediol is approximatively twice as active as pentanediol but the latter also exists as Ecocert naturally derived product. The few trial formulations I did turned out less viscous with pentanediol but I wouldn’t interpret too much into that finding. You don’t necessarily need both and you may try out just one but at higher %. Although some stuff I’ve read implies a broader spectrum if both are mixed.
Ethylhexylglycerin is often used at 1/10 of the preservative (different blends with phenoxyethanol or chlorphenesin are commercially available) and acts as booster; meaning it lowers MIC (or lowers the amount of preservative needed) and apparently broadens the spectrum.
Me personally, I can’t/don’t want to run challenge tests because I don’t sell, so I prefer using not too much but still enough to be on the safe side. I’d at least consider to include something like GMCY or phenylpropanol to further boost the blend of 1,2-XXXdiol and ethylhexylglycerin.